miss D writing group

Hi I have been listening to a book and I've been listening and recording the book and that's is called Dictation the book was about new Zealand birds. here is a piece of my new Zealand birds.




Endangered birds of new Zealand was Sammy favourite book. He keep it in his backpack tucked safely in a nok. When the book was closed, the birds were squashed inside, hidden between the pagies, trap closely Side by side. “This is nothing like the mountains, Takahe Scouted out loud. “Tight spots are  not Suitable for a bird so Bright and proud. Toroa long to spread his wings but was crawled up in a ball. “My wing span’s far too wide for a book that is so small. kiwi cried,” I maby small’ and my eye site very weak but i’ve the longest nose so by far’ and this page is a pain in the beak!” “Spare a thought for me’ cranky Teki.” I’m so upside down and inside out’ my back is on my head!.” Kokako then chimed’ ”there's no room for my thrilling”.My brake’s are jammed in the corner. i’d hardly call that thring.” “I like quiet’ hoiho said in a soft and wisped ton.’ i’m glad the dook’s. I prefer to be alone.From the Darkness’ kakapo Spoke’ “ sammy’s moving’ we’re on the on the go.“ he was starting to feel sea sick as the book sewing too and fro. Suddenly’ the birds went quiet.’cause They could Hear the sound of Children's Muffled talking’ from all around. “It’s show and tell! cried tieke “the best time of the weak.” Toroa got his wing ready kiwi taped  his beak.Woosah ! The cover flow Open and summy spock out  lond “ these are all my Favourite birds.” holding the book up to the crowd The birds brist from the pages, like a rainbow Feathered sea the. They were Screeching,Squawking ,flipping and amazing sight to see. Tieke wobbled his wottles, A move he does best. Takahe lept in the the teacher’s hair and tried to build a nest’! hohio hide behind sammy’ waddling out of sight. Kakapo bounset here and there’ trying to fly with all his might. Kokako sing proudly and her like malady filled the air. Toroa sowered above the children, then perched upon a chair.


This was done in term 2 don't be afraid to comment on my blog.