This is my story.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, July 22, 2020
100 Words
Hello everyone how are you today we did a 100 words writing challenged and we had to base it on a photo and this was the photo.
Hi I'm stripes the zebra. I really want to become circus zebra but before I did I died I thought the vets would be able to save me but they didn’t so now I live in heaven. I thought I could become a circus zebra in heaven but I thought of what happen on earth maybe I never could become one. Then I saw this lion I asked why hes so sad he said it because was about to be a circus lion he died then I asked if he wanted to make a circus he agreed that how I'm here.
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