Lo: create a piece of writing that describes a place or a setting inspired by a song.
It was one stormy night I love the storm and the rain it's so relaxing I was out camping so that was better but no fair from here my friend that there was a old house I said we can go check it out in the morning we all went to sleep next morning we went to the house there were broken planks broken windows it looked old so we went in side it looked gross it had mold all over it and it smelled so gross so we went further in and then my friend dispersed it was so weird.
This is a story from a song that the teacher showed us I hope this is good and I hope you all like it. This was fun to write. here is the song
Thursday, June 6, 2019
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Hi Jessica
ReplyDeleteI liked reading your descriptive writing on your blog. I hadn't thought of a camping setting when I heard the song, but listening to it again while I read your story, I can see what you are describing.
To improve your work, make sure you are doing a quick self edit. I would like to see some more full stops and punctuation in your writing tasks.
- Miss Birtch