Ahhhhh there they are I need to get home. I run as fast as I can they got home before me I got in the door before they shut it on me. I ran to their room but they got in there first. Yes ok go back where we were. Great it is Friday we're going to our dads. Yay!
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, June 21, 2019
Your shoes aren't lost... they are hiding
Hi I am a shoe well shoes. What shoes am I? Well they are like heels but flat boots ok don't worry about it. I will show you a picture later of what I look like. What I do when my owners aren't around...Well I normally sit in their room but one time I got out so I decide to go to see my friends. At the warehouse they were all just hanging there I think they need a home - poor them. Then I went to the park for some fun there was people walking around with shoes on I went up and said hi to the shoes but they just walked away. Rude much! So then I decided to walk home before my owner got home.
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Kia ora Jessica!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your piece of creative writing about the shoes. I could really see your personal voice coming through and I think you had fun with this task. I also like the pair of shoes you wrote about, very fashionable!
Next time I would like to see an introduction explaining what this task was about and why you are sharing your writing with us!
- Miss Birtch