Hello we had to write a 100 word challenge to a photo.
Here's the photo
Here's my story
Hello I'm Squeaker I'm a little mouse but I live in a big house. I love the food here but it's hard to get because of the big fat cat that walks in the kitchen waiting for me. I hate that cat. He's so annoying. I tried to escape this time out of my little hole. I got out and ran as fast as I could. This cat was on my tail. I grabbed the cheese and ran. I hid inside a small cup. I could hear him growing right behind me. I had to make a plan. I looked around, saw the cat food and ran to it.
Hi Leo,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you put the story in the point of view of the mouse. Also how you added the picture so people could know what the actual picture was. Maybe next time look over the words because you accidentally said can instead of cat.
Hi Alexia
DeleteThank you for this comment I fixed up the can and put it as cat