I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, August 21, 2019
C.I.P All Blacks
Hi everyone how are you I hope your doing great today we have been doing something about the All Black this is what I know I want to know what I found out all that stuff I didn't know some of this stuff. but know I do like there not number 1 any more. I hope you like it I tried my best to do it but I hope you like it have a great day.
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Hi Jessica
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing the research you did about the All Blacks. I would like to see you making connections in your introduction. Why do you think you were asked to do this task? I would also like to see some more focus on your punctuation and where your capital letters go!
- Miss Birtch