Hola everyone how are you today. I have been working on something from the working at home site its a movie trailer but since we are young we can't really make a movie trailer but here is my movie trailer.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, May 22, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia ora Jessica
ReplyDeleteI liked seeing the Biteable movie trailer you created. You were working hard on this in class and it looks like you've created some interesting characters. I look forward to reading your story and finding out more about them.
Be sure to remember that all names have capital letters, so when you introduce your characters their names should have capitals at the start.
Maybe next time you could embed the video so we can see the preview right on your post, that would also make it stand out more on your blog and draw your readers to that post.
- Miss Birtch