I also called my drawing (The Bridge Of Terabthia Spring)
So we had to write a narrative about out work and here's mine
On a sunny morning 2 friends were on a little walk on a bridge and they had a great time on the walk. They sat down and had a picnic but then they carried on walking down the bridge. One of the friends decided to run along the bridge but she hit one plank and it broke she slipped and right under the bridge was a very very long drop. She was only holding on one plank her friend heard her scream. She turned around and couldn’t see her so she ran down to find her. She heard her friend yell “STOP” she stopped but she could only barely see her friend. She started to walk and her friend told her to slow down so she did. As she walked the bridge started cracking she ran to her friend and pulled her up they both jumped off the bridge falling on their stomach and then they both laughed it off and walked home on the grass.
Hi Leo
ReplyDeleteI like how you added it onto this blog post and not another one because it matches the story. Next time could you make the introbushion bigger for the writing. Overall it was a good story and blog.
- Carla